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I loved this, James! I thought you did a great job weaving in memories as the story progressed.

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Thank you, Justin! I much appreciate your thoughts!

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May 19, 2023·edited May 19, 2023Liked by James Ron

Such a beautiful line: "He stared eyes wide-open into a blackness brilliantly white, spellbound, resting in peace." And your ending was so clever, so unpredicted!. Excellent work, James!

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Sharron, thank you! I value your thoughts, and your writings, very much.

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Great story James. Love the name of the astronaut and memories of his family. Good Job

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Thank you very much, Scott! I appreciate it. I was hesitant at first to call him Major Tom, but it fit so well.

Thanks also for the recommendation! I'm enjoying your Vision Quest stories.

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