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Justin Deming's avatar

I loved this, James! I thought you did a great job weaving in memories as the story progressed.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Such a beautiful line: "He stared eyes wide-open into a blackness brilliantly white, spellbound, resting in peace." And your ending was so clever, so unpredicted!. Excellent work, James!

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