#122 - Jimmy Swann #19 - She came in like a whirlwind, a blast of color on the arid desert with her scarves and skirts catching the uplift in the morning breeze.
A love connection and tense drama at the end. What more can a reader ask for? I still have previous chapters to read to get caught up. With one more chapter to go, I better get on the ball. I always enjoy you stories, James. I like your style.
: ) I appreciate your willingness to read past chapters. I know it's hard to get caught up on an ongoing serial. Thank you for your words and support, K.C.
Great storytelling, Ron. I get a real kick out of how you and Sharron trade characters. I'm really anxious to see what happens to the Airstream in the fire. I hope old Jimmy can catch a break.
Thank you, Jim! Yes, it has worked out with Bella. I'm not sure what is going to happen to the Airstream, I like it a lot. Maybe time for it to go. : )
I loved this simple line, Ron: "Fred was happy. Bella was happy. Jimmy was happy."
You have a really tense description of the brush fire here, my friend. I imagine you have, in your own life, been up close and personal with the experience. You created a real sense of urgency. AND a cliff-hanging ending! Nice work. I will send it on to the real life Bella. She will be tickled to know that you have put Fred in her life!
Hi Sharron. Glad you liked that line, and the story! I've been fortunate and have not been on the wrong end of a fire. I've known a few who have and have talked to others. With so much video coverage of our many California fires, we can see how erratic the fires can be. I hope the real life Bella enjoys the story. Thank you very much!
A love connection and tense drama at the end. What more can a reader ask for? I still have previous chapters to read to get caught up. With one more chapter to go, I better get on the ball. I always enjoy you stories, James. I like your style.
: ) I appreciate your willingness to read past chapters. I know it's hard to get caught up on an ongoing serial. Thank you for your words and support, K.C.
Your stories feel so authentic that it's hard to tell where the real events and characters end and the fiction begins. Great stuff!
You made my day, J.M.! Thank you very much. I appreciate your support and kind words!
Great storytelling, Ron. I get a real kick out of how you and Sharron trade characters. I'm really anxious to see what happens to the Airstream in the fire. I hope old Jimmy can catch a break.
Thank you, Jim! Yes, it has worked out with Bella. I'm not sure what is going to happen to the Airstream, I like it a lot. Maybe time for it to go. : )
I loved this simple line, Ron: "Fred was happy. Bella was happy. Jimmy was happy."
You have a really tense description of the brush fire here, my friend. I imagine you have, in your own life, been up close and personal with the experience. You created a real sense of urgency. AND a cliff-hanging ending! Nice work. I will send it on to the real life Bella. She will be tickled to know that you have put Fred in her life!
Hi Sharron. Glad you liked that line, and the story! I've been fortunate and have not been on the wrong end of a fire. I've known a few who have and have talked to others. With so much video coverage of our many California fires, we can see how erratic the fires can be. I hope the real life Bella enjoys the story. Thank you very much!