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Sharron Bassano's avatar

I loved this simple line, Ron: "Fred was happy. Bella was happy. Jimmy was happy."

You have a really tense description of the brush fire here, my friend. I imagine you have, in your own life, been up close and personal with the experience. You created a real sense of urgency. AND a cliff-hanging ending! Nice work. I will send it on to the real life Bella. She will be tickled to know that you have put Fred in her life!

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J. M. Elliott's avatar

Your stories feel so authentic that it's hard to tell where the real events and characters end and the fiction begins. Great stuff!

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