Whew, James, this guy knew his stuff. Well written; I could visualize the whole thing, including the getaway sailing through the mountains. The exchange was particularly original and crafty. Will you make this a series? I'd read other installments featuring different heists.
That was great, Ron. After reading the first installment, I commented that you were making me root for the bad guy but now I see that they were all bad guys. Well, at least the best bad guy won. Really enjoyed this, cowboy. Great stuff.
Pretty exciting stuff, Ron! Such a new voice, compared to your other work. I was thinking you might want to add "Part 2" to your title or subtitle at the top, for those who hadn't seen part 1?
I was gripped by the action and suspense from the first sentence to last. Awesome tale!!
Thank you very much, Jim! You made my day.
Whew, James, this guy knew his stuff. Well written; I could visualize the whole thing, including the getaway sailing through the mountains. The exchange was particularly original and crafty. Will you make this a series? I'd read other installments featuring different heists.
Hi, K.C., and thank you very much. I'm not sure about a series. A couple of ideas are in mind but nothing has come together yet.
That was great, Ron. After reading the first installment, I commented that you were making me root for the bad guy but now I see that they were all bad guys. Well, at least the best bad guy won. Really enjoyed this, cowboy. Great stuff.
Thank you very much, Jim. I much appreciate it and your support. Yep, just a den of thieves. : )
Pretty exciting stuff, Ron! Such a new voice, compared to your other work. I was thinking you might want to add "Part 2" to your title or subtitle at the top, for those who hadn't seen part 1?
Thank you, Sharron. That's a good idea. I'll do that.
This is excellent. You are a damn good writer.
Jim, I'm taking your words to heart, and I can't thank you enough, but Thank You.