You've got a great bunch of diverse characters here and that makes it interesting. I was on-edge hoping that Jimmy wouldn't get caught by the drug smugglers. Now let's hope they get caught! Great work. Keep it going brother.
Wow! Great job, James. Lots of action in this episode. Will we find out if the drug runners were caught? I liked Jimmy's brave part in this. I will have to read it a couple more times to sort out all the names and relationships, but was glad Jimmy was so happy to have everyone around him at one time. Nice touch! ( PS If you can't work Haylene and Marla into the Louisiana visit, don't worry about it!)
Hi Sharron! Thank you! Not sure yet if they will be caught. I'm not there yet. : ) Re Haylene and Marla - they'll be in the next chapter - I'll be in touch in a couple of weeks with what I have. : )
You've got a great bunch of diverse characters here and that makes it interesting. I was on-edge hoping that Jimmy wouldn't get caught by the drug smugglers. Now let's hope they get caught! Great work. Keep it going brother.
Thank you, Jim! Good to hear from you!
Wow! Great job, James. Lots of action in this episode. Will we find out if the drug runners were caught? I liked Jimmy's brave part in this. I will have to read it a couple more times to sort out all the names and relationships, but was glad Jimmy was so happy to have everyone around him at one time. Nice touch! ( PS If you can't work Haylene and Marla into the Louisiana visit, don't worry about it!)
Hi Sharron! Thank you! Not sure yet if they will be caught. I'm not there yet. : ) Re Haylene and Marla - they'll be in the next chapter - I'll be in touch in a couple of weeks with what I have. : )
Looking forward to next installment!
Thank you very much! Jim!