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You've got a great bunch of diverse characters here and that makes it interesting. I was on-edge hoping that Jimmy wouldn't get caught by the drug smugglers. Now let's hope they get caught! Great work. Keep it going brother.

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Thank you, Jim! Good to hear from you!

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Wow! Great job, James. Lots of action in this episode. Will we find out if the drug runners were caught? I liked Jimmy's brave part in this. I will have to read it a couple more times to sort out all the names and relationships, but was glad Jimmy was so happy to have everyone around him at one time. Nice touch! ( PS If you can't work Haylene and Marla into the Louisiana visit, don't worry about it!)

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Hi Sharron! Thank you! Not sure yet if they will be caught. I'm not there yet. : ) Re Haylene and Marla - they'll be in the next chapter - I'll be in touch in a couple of weeks with what I have. : )

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Looking forward to next installment!

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Thank you very much! Jim!

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