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K.C. Knouse's avatar

I like that you emphasize the attraction of the sky. I have found that to be true for me living in the desert. Great job of working in some of Jimmy's backstory. An ideal ending, especially in view of the backstory revealed earlier. I am enjoying this tale, James.

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James Ron's avatar

The sky, such a wonderful thing, and free. Glad you are liking it K.C.!

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Jim Cummings's avatar

I was relieved to see old Jimmy in the AC with a couple bottles of H2O. The ravens were an interesting side story that revealed a lot about Jimmy's character. Nice job cowboy!

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James Ron's avatar

Thank you, Jim! Yes, Jimmy was getting light-headed. Btw, Seabiscuit arrived, I'm almost through it. I knew of Seabiscuit and War Admiral, but didn't know much more about them. My heart was thumping during their race! Much thanks for the recommendation. Very inspiring, indeed.

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Yeah, now I want to read it again if I didn’t give it away to someone.

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Ed Hamilton's avatar

Its a good read Ron, thank u.

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James Ron's avatar

Hi, Ed. Thank you!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Cool story, James. Mr Swann is having quite an adventure out there in that heat. It worried me that he was running out of water. Lady in a white pick up to the rescue! Yaaaay!

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James Ron's avatar

Thanks, Sharron! Yes, Jimmy is having a good time. But was glad to see the white pickup. : )

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