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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Another great ending with the promise of more adventure ahead. I enjoyed reading your descriptions of the desert, especially at night.

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James Ron's avatar

I'm grateful, K.C. I love the desert at night. Thank you for the flurry of likes and comments and your time!!

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Jim Cummings's avatar

My favorite line: "He had arrived." I could just feel that old Jimmy was feeling pretty good about his new life and the simple pleasures of living in nature.

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James Ron's avatar

Yes, that's it! Keep things simple.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

Oh no, James! You have left us hanging again! I am certainly enjoying this odyssey - part story, part travel log. I would not want to make this trip myself, though, other than from my armchair! I look forward to the next part.

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James Ron's avatar

Thank you, Sharron! I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, it is for the hardy. I'm enjoying writing it from my armchair. :)

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