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J. M. Elliott's avatar

Wonderful :-)

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James Ron's avatar

J.M., thank yo very much!

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K.C. Knouse's avatar

Wonderful adventure story. So innocent and spare in its telling. I felt as if I were sitting around a campfire, hearing this tale. Thanks for sharing it with us, James.

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James Ron's avatar

Campfire stories are a great compliment. Thank you, K.C.

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Theo has a great style of storytelling. Kinda like someone else I know. I love the name Riot for a pony. Great job, boys!

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James Ron's avatar

I like the name Riot also. Thank you for your encouraging words, Jim!

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

A fine story! The hero has to return to his chores, though. That's life, isn't it...

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James Ron's avatar

It sure is. The work is never done. Thank you, Sharron. I much appreciate it.

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James Ron's avatar

Thank you, Chip. I'll pass it on to Theo. : )

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Mark Starlin's avatar

A good tale, Theo. 🤓

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James Ron's avatar

Hi, Mark. Thank you very much.

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The Radical Individualist's avatar

This kid is on the way to being a great writer!

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James Ron's avatar

Thank you, Chip. I'll pass it on to Theo. : )

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