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Sharron Bassano's avatar

This is such beautiful descriptive language, Ron, "A deep purple tint on the eastern horizon pushed against the black of night and Venus sparkled in the pre-dawn. The last of the winter’s snow stood out in drifts and patches." I am there. I guess he made the best decision for himself. I understood that, but still.... that train....

"Time loses its grip – into my mind I slip – away – slip away." Been there.

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Jim Cummings's avatar

Fascinating piece, Ron. It's sad that so many ranchers/farmers are facing the same decision these days. I like the compromise your protagonist strikes to respect the family heritage while adapting to the new reality. Maybe now, he'll get to travel. Those big freight cars must be a big temptation.

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